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Do You Have a Psychic Vampire Critique Partner?

Kristen Lamb's Blog

Several months ago, in my Enemies of the Art series, we discussed Psychic Vampires. Psychic Vampires are all around us, and likely, we will never be rid of them. PVs are most likely to show up at a number of critical junctures. They sense the energy shift, and since that energy is no longer all about them, they will fight tooth-and-nail to bring balance to The Force (of Manipulation).

While many of my posts are directed toward writers, most people have these same issues. If we don’t learn how to guard against and handle PVs, we will always be their victims. Psychic Vampires will always feel renewed and refreshed, namely because they just sucked the life out of their victims (us).

Psychic Vampires abound in the arts, and they’re also prevalent in many writing groups. They are vamps dressed in writer clothing. Often they are so self-absorbed they can’t even…

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River Bluff Writer’s Retreat

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Snack, snack, talk, talk, talk, snack, snack.

Oh, and some writing.

Last Friday and Saturday, Fifteen Minutes of Fame, an Austin writing group, held a Year One First Ever Annual Retreat at the River Bluff cabin near Fentress, Texas, on the lovely pecan bottoms by the San Marcos River.

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We acquired hamburgers Friday night and pizza Saturday night from the local convenience store. There was no television, land-line phone, or Internet service. We had to sit around and…talk…and snack….a lot. And the snacks! Trail mix, cookies, hummus, crackers, grapes, strawberries, cherries, bananas, tangerines, cheeses, veggie chips, Cheetos, booze, soda, and Guatemalan Dark coffee.

On Saturday, discipline reared its head, and the group did three fifteen-minute timed writings with a prompt. The first prompt was “retreat,” then “grip,” (as in get a), then “murder in the woods” suggested by yours truly. We all scribbled furiously, then read our offerings aloud.

It was great fun. I haven’t sat down and talked continuously with a small group of people in I don’t know when. Many topics were touched upon, but none were exhausted. Although the conference attendees were rather exhausted when Sunday morning rolled around.

One person slept on a cot on the upstairs deck, sheltered by giant pecan trees, two of us on beds on the second floor, and two more downstairs on couch/rollaway bed combinations.

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I can safely say a good time was had by all. The addition of Chucho, an Airedale-poodle mix dog, was a great delight.

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The place was gorgeous and peaceful, visited by sweet brown deer and chirpy birds. And chirpy writers.

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Six Easy Tips for Self-Editing Your Fiction

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There are a lot of hurdles to writing great fiction, which is why it’s always important to keep reading and writing. We only get better by DOING. Today we’re going to talk about some self-editing tips to help you clean up your book before you hire an editor.

When I worked as an editor, I found it frustrating when I couldn’t even GET to the story because I was too distracted by these all too common oopses.

There are many editors who charge by the hour. If they’re spending their time fixing blunders you could’ve easily repaired yourself? You’re burning cash and time. Yet, correct these problems, and editors can more easily get to the MEAT of your novel. This means you will spend less money and get far higher value.

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Kaye George Comes to Austin

Kaye George at BookPeople

Kaye George at BookPeople

The members of Austin Mystery Writers were clustered at their literary haunt in the BookPeople café on Thursday morning, eagerly awaiting the arrival of famed author and Grand Poobah emerita Kaye George.

“Gosh,” I said to the group. “I hope she remembers the little people.”

august 15 bp 050I need not have worried. With all her usual charm and warmth, Kaye George appeared wearing a big fedora, carrying a giant magnifying glass, and blinding us with her dazzling smile.

We had missed Kaye George. Once a guiding beacon in AMW in Austin, she had moved to Waco, then Knoxville, Tennessee, too far away to attend the weekly critique group meetings.

However, that didn’t stop Kaye from being an active participant in AMW. She’s still a major player in the group, we’re glad to say.

august 15 bp 058Kaye George has been an inspiration to fellow writers. She fought hard to become a published author, always refusing to give up her dream of publication. Her organizational skills are truly amazing. She blogs, writes short stories and books, and participates in panel discussions and book tours. In fact, she’s on her way to the upcoming Killer Nashville conference. She is a force to be reckoned with (yes, ending with a preposition, but it sounds good).


Kaye’s first novel, CHOKE, was published in 2011 and was nominated for an Agatha award for Best First Novel. In 2012, she added the sequels SMOKE and BROKE to her new series, the Imogene Duckworthy humorous Texas mysteries.
In April of 2013, EINE KLEINE MURDER (a Cressa Carraway Musical  Mystery) was published by Barking Rain Press. In June, her Neanderthal mystery thriller, DEATH IN THE TIME OF ICE, was published by Untreed Reads. Kaye hopes to have an audio version of CHOKE available this fall, as well as a boxed set of the Duckworthy mysteries.

Kaye has a three-book contract with Berkeley Prime Crime and is hard at work to complete her first finished Fat Cat cozy mystery by September 15. She will write this series using the nom de plume Janet Cantrell.

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Janice Hamrick in Pflugerville


Hopeton Hay of KAZI Book Review interviewed author Janice Hamrick at the Pflugerville Community Library on Saturday, July 20, 2013 about her new mystery novel, Death Rides Again.

HAY: I first interviewed Janice about three years ago when her first book Death on Tour came out. I met her through Scott Montgomery, crime fiction coordinator at BookPeople. Janice was one of the most delightfully entertaining guests, better than some Pulitzer Prize winners with her bubbly spirit. She won a contest with her first book, which won the national Mystery Writers Minotaur contest for first crime novel. It was great to have her on the KAZI Book Review. Janice, your lead character, Jocelyn Shore, went from Egypt in the first novel, to Austin in the second, Death Makes the Cut, and now appears in a tiny Central Texas town in Death Rides Again, the third book. Why the new setting?

100_0443HAMRICK: Suggestions from my editor. I felt it would be good to bring her home to her natural habitat. You get to know a character better in her daily life. Plus I had all these stories from a Central Texas town that I just had to tell. In real life, Uncle Kel never pulled a shotgun on anybody. He does point a shotgun at Ruby June’s husband abusive husband in the book.

HAY: That caught my attention. Were you raising serious issues that resonated with you?

HAMRICK: Why would you kill someone? To protect someone you love. I did it to provide a believable motive. Not so much trying to introduce this issue, but to provide a believable motive.

(The character) Jocelyn Shore just came to me. I was on a trip to Egypt, but with no murder or hot guys.

HAY: Hot guys are in every one of her books!

HAMRICK: She was a person whose ego was badly damaged, but not bitter. She still liked men. Wounded but grounded, a strong character.

HAY: I like the tension between Jocelyn and her cousin Kyla. She’s better looking and knows it. Did you want a foil?

HAMRICK: Yes, You either love Kyla or hate her. People come up and say to me “I cannot stand the things she does.” The two women have been close since high school. The new setting is Sand Creek. It looks idyllic, no issues, or problems, but there are currents running underneath.

HAY: In Death Rides Again, there are some money problems that surface. My favorite is the goat. It’s charming. It makes a couple of appearances as Jocelyn’s nemesis.

HAMRICK: It’s a small, minor nemesis. Goats have very strong personalities. Jocelyn needs assistance getting the goat out of her truck.

HAY: Let’s get to the love interest. Heaving bosoms? Colin Gallagher? They kinda sorta have a thing?

100_0449HAMRICK: In the first book, she falls in love with Alan. He doesn’t live in Austin. In the second book she meets this fascinating man, Colin Gallagher. She’s not somebody who would have two boyfriends normally, not two at a time. She has to make a decision.

HAY: You know that song, if you can’t be with the one you love, just love the one you’re with.

HAMRICK: I’m not sure about that.

HAY: Let’s talk about your writing process. You have a full-time job. What was different about writing the third book?

HAMRICK: The first book had already come out, the second one was ready to do stuff like this (gesturing to the meeting in the library). My editor said you need to be on Facebook, Twitter, etc. The additional load of work brought me into the business end. Before, I focused on writing. Now it’s like, Okay, I’ve written, now I have to go and tweet about it.

HAY: It’s no fun. It’s like work.

HAMRICK: It may be a generational thing for sure. All my friends are on Facebook. Then I have to worry about being interviewed and being witty.

HAY: Who was your favorite new character?

HAMRICK: Uncle Herman.

HAY: Crotchety. Sort of an older, male Kyla.

HAMRICK: I like him and cousin Chris. The shadier characters were fun to write about.

HAY: Carl Cress.

HAMRICK: Stereotypically good ole boy, big gut, big belt buckle, wheeler dealer, knows everyone in town. You like him at first, what a great guy. Then you learn he’ll sell you down the river.

HAY: How do you edit and write?

HAMRICK: I look at the last paragraph I wrote to get ready. I try not to go back until I’m all the way done. Until you get to the end, then you can go back to the rough places. I wake at five a.m. and write until I have to go to work, almost every day. It’s one to two hours a day. That’s just the amount of time I’m touching the keyboard. But I think about it all the time. As a writer you think about stuff all the time. You listen to people, a light bulb goes off. I’m not at the keyboard ten hours a day but still focus on the book.

An audience member asks if Janice Hamrick already knows what happens in a book. Does she already know who the killer is?

HAMRICK: I have to know the plot points, etc. I’m following a road map but taking all these day trips. That’s where the magic comes in. For instance, in one of the novels, somebody disappears. Jocelyn Shore was not half as worried as I was. Where was he? I had to keep writing until it worked out. It has to fit in a mystery. Magic happens between plot points. I’ve had tears running down my face when a character dies. They become very real to me.

HAY: Why is this third novel set in November?

HAMRICK: She still had boyfriends dangling around. I couldn’t wait that long, not until next summer.

HAY: Where are you now on your next book?

HAMRICK: I’m taking a break from Jocelyn Shore. I’m writing about a new character.

HAY: Another mystery?

HAMRICK: Yes. I wanted to write in the third person and work with different characters.

HAY: Do you ban yourself from reading other mystery novels (while you’re writing)?

HAMRICK: I do. And it’s a problem. I go to writers’ presentations at BookPeople, I buy their books. But I don’t want to read them until I’m almost through writing. I usually read a lot of non fiction while I’m writing.

100_0450HAY: Who are your favorite Texas writers?

HAMRICK: Reavis Wortham, Karen MacInerney, and Jeff Abbott, who is a bit edgier.

HAY: Take off the Texas limitation.

HAMRICK: Louise Penney, Craig Johnson, Hilary Davidson. My favorite writer is Ellis Peters and the Brother Cadfael series. I love Brother Cadfael. I also like Dick Francis.

HAY: What’s your advice to writers?

HAMRICK: Don’t listen to those negative voices in your head. If you start something, finish it. It’s what will make you grow and get better as a writer and help you realize your dreams. Tell that negative voice to leave you alone, you’re writing!

HAY: Thanks, Janice.

HAMRICK: Listen to Hopeton Hay’s program on Monday mornings. It’s fun.

HAY: Check out the program on Facebook. I hope to get Janice Hamrick back on the show. Thanks for coming everybody, and thanks to the gorgeous Pflugerville library.

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Pflugerville Community Library (Photo credit: PflugerPfotos)


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